Well first of I should say that your style is nothing of... AMAZING! It isn't horrible though... but then again it's not good either. Nothing in your animation seemed to flow... things need to flow or else it looks like the animation is a little stiff.
Now onto the actual music video. The story was horrible and unorigional... I mean, I have seen tons of videos to beautiful songs like these, but they don't match the style of the song, and there was absolutely no story, I've seen tons of music videos that contain exactly the same material you have put into your video, and I've given them all the same rating.
Now before you start commenting "so yeah, stop reviewing things cuz it seems like your writing for the sake of writing... you dont know shit..." I've got some constructive criticism.
Your animations are too stiff. It's quite simple too fix with your style of animating. Just add some blurred shots of the charecters when they move. It would smooth out the animation.
As for the story, you have a very... "creative" mind. And with your "creative" mind I would suggest songs more goofy like. Try a Weird Al song and if you don't like any weird and cooky songs... I suggest a new style.
Now please do not try to make me look like an idiot by writing what you did on all the reviewers who tried to help you. I would suggest you should take our reviews as consrtuctive criticism, not as your average school bully who will make fun of you for everything.
Accepting constructive criticism is the first step... trust me. Unless you accept the criticism, you will never do better.
That's about it. You have plenty of potential and could definittly do well.
It was okay, the animation was nice for sprite movie, and the voices made me laugh inside. Note: "laugh inside". This was nothing laugh out loud at all, the voices were too low to be funny, and it sounded like you were making a poor attempt to be egorapter (except in a more retarded way). Thus, I agree. But why did this make front page!? Many people spend hours and hours trying to make a decent flash that newgrounds likes, and a movie that probably took you like a day to make gets a front page! But I soppose reviews aren't meant for saying rude comments like "YoU SuCk FoR GeTtInG FrOnT PaGe!@?/" (by the way, how do people type like that. It takes so fucking long!) So I probably instead be congratulatating you! Congrats!
*ahem* back to the review -_-'
So like I said voice acting seemed rushed, Animation wasn't long enough or non-spritish to count as a part, and it barely made me laugh...
5/10 - 2/5 Work on your voice acting... that's all I have too say...
An almost perfect 9/10, in 2 ways
Individual Video Review
Animation: 10/10 Amazing, so much beauty and detail. It was amazing...
Story: 9/10 The story of this one was good, of course there were some parts that were too expected but it was a good ending.
Origionality: 8/10 Of course the whole "it ends how it begun" thing is quite overused, and would normally dissapoint me, but it was pretty origional
Sound effects: N/A
Final Comment: 9/10 It was amazing, The animation was very well done, there was nice sync, good flow, (which is the repetivness of a style of syncing used if anyone doesn't know) the story is tied up, a decent ending.
Animation: 10/10 the animation was very well done and fleud, Everything was beautiful (curse my 2nd grade spelling), I liked to see the style as the main charectors sped of out of the airport return after a VERY serious Step 4.
Story: 10/10 It was a very nice, devoliping storyline, some things were minorly expected as i said before but, very minor.
Origoinality: 8/10 The idea was... very origional, My only problems were that, the "different people" idea is used much, and again the "how it ends is how it begun" thing.
Sound effects: N/A
9.3/10 which rounds to a 9/10 Good concept, unorigional, but good, very beautiful fleud animation.
I haven't seen the previous episodes but this seems like something to do with prejudicness? (sp)Possibly? Anyways amazing story... Nice animation... you synced well... It was completey awesome!!!
Animation is decent and the follow-up, to the punchline was good. but the punchline wasn't greatly anticipated. Pretty good for a short flash though...
Loved everything about it, the flash was absolutely amazing. I've been following this series since episode 6 finnally came out and thought you were gone... but you made your return. Your an inspiration to my sprite movies and hope to make one just as good as yours...
Good luck along the road!
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